Please open up the file below to read the short story. If you cannot open it, please let me know!
Hope you enjoy.
Post a comment and let me know what you think.
Update, today is Nov. 6, 2010. Below is a link to the continuation of the story. It starts with a section from the first part of the story, so that you can connect it to the end. You can scroll down to where you left off.
GREAT story! Thank you so much for sharing it! I really enjoyed it!
WOW! When is the next chapter coming?
Very good descriptions, made me feel like I was there with them… 🙂
I’m going to start working on the second part of the story soon! So stay tuned 🙂
Great story! Left me on the edge of my seat. Can’t wait to read more. Please finish the story sooon:)